Hubbly Bubbly

[debbe]

I started experimenting with fl studio, until I found out I really like it to do it, the videofootage is also of me, but I think it's to chaotic, but this is my result. I'm not here to brag... I'm here to receive tips and feedback on how to get better, please leave any, I need it. Thank you!

[Royce]

to bad they dont have stuff like this on mac, If i had this i could make my film project look so much cooler

[debbe]

to bad they dont have stuff like this on mac, If i had this i could make my film project look so much cooler

you mean after effects?? if yes, that is possible man.

[Larity2056]

Very nice

[Royce]

you mean after effects?? if yes, that is possible man.

reliable links?

[debbe]

Very nice

IF you are really russian; SPASIBA!

Btw. sander van doorn is really good, dutch like me

But thanks

[Youtro]

You started the actual beat too late. Other than that, It's kinda nice

[debbe]

reliable links?

The Pirate Bay Proxy - The galaxy's most resilient bittorrent site

any more help pm me

[Spaghetti Master]

The only negative feedback that I can think of is that it is too long.
It is all the same thing for 4 minutes and 20 seconds.
If you make it that long change up what is happening or just make it shorter.
PS: That huge logo in the middle looks a bit out of place and unnecessary.
PPS: This was in the related videos, okay.

[debbe]

You started the actual beat too late. Other than that, It's kinda nice

Ye, the delay is according the plan, haha, but if that doesn't fit... Thanks for feedback

---------- Post added at 10:14 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:13 PM ----------

The only negative feedback that I can think of is that it is too long.
It is all the same thing for 4 minutes and 20 seconds.
If you make it that long change up what is happening or just make it shorter.
PS: That huge logo in the middle looks a bit out of place and unnecessary.
PPS: This was in the related videos, okay.

Ye, I actually had to shorten it before, because it was 5 and a half minute, without noticing... So I shortened it to this.

Thanks for feedback, any tips on placement of logo?

[Royce]

The Pirate Bay Proxy - The galaxy's most resilient bittorrent site

any more help pm me

Ihave that but i think it was in trial, it was kinda confusing to use but thanks man

[Spaghetti Master]

Ye, the delay is according the plan, haha, but if that doesn't fit... Thanks for feedback

---------- Post added at 10:14 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:13 PM ----------



Ye, I actually had to shorten it before, because it was 5 and a half minute, without noticing... So I shortened it to this.

Thanks for feedback, any tips on placement of logo?

A corner maybe? It doesn't really serve any purpose.
PS: I just realized the "Hubbly Bubbly" text looks a bit too scrunched up, maybe move it to the top right and stretch it out a bit.

[debbe]

Ihave that but i think it was in trial, it was kinda confusing to use but thanks man

Use the crack, there is always a "how-to-install-a-crack READ ME.txt"

[Spaghetti Master]

Ihave that but i think it was in trial, it was kinda confusing to use but thanks man

You obviously forgot to crack it then.
Did you read the READ ME.txt?

[debbe]

You obviously forgot to crack it then.
Did you read the READ ME.txt?

BTW guys, can you help me on an artist name?

My reallife name is David, but I don't know I should use it in my artist name or choose a total different one.

(I dont know if this info helps, but I'm russian and I live in the netherlands.)