My creations

[HalfBajan]

Yeah so his is my soundcloud, take a listen of any of them and tell me what you think
https://soundcloud.com/djtrafford

[Black Eyed Peas]

Bookmarked! Fuck yeah these are awesome.

Critique:

Satan's breakfast - gets too repetitive at the end
Bikie Bob - also repetitive, wrong choice of sound effects, it just doesn't mix together,
Sitting on the balcony - wrong choice of name, the sounds sitting on a balcony is boring whereas the beats suggest some fun, adventurous rhythm, maybe you should've been more bold with this one and made some parts even more explosive and intense
A Boys Piano - messy rhythm and weird mixture of themes and beats, it just feels like the sound is all over the place

I don't have time to listen to all of them now, but I'll surely be listening to them another time.

Basically you shouldn't be afraid to move on and progress from a certain beat because in a lot of your songs just one rhythm takes up 1/4 of the whole song and when you change to the next rhythm it's usually similar to the previous one

That's just my opinion though, I'm not a professional music critic.