SOTW #26 Progress

[mexicano007]

Hey guys this is what i have so far needs improvement i know and text sucks any suggestions for text ?
[IMG]https://i810.photobucke*****m/albums/zz21/zweet_kiler/Horror.png[/IMG]

Edit:
After Make My Days Useful text Advice
[IMG]https://i810.photobucke*****m/albums/zz21/zweet_kiler/Horror1.png[/IMG]
still not good but first time.

[R3V]

Pretty shit.

Text needs a better location and a different colour

[Make My Day]

delete the duplicated woman thing.
Text, make it completely normal arial, the only effect you need on the text, is colour and blending, try a clipping mask on the text, and if you can set the text to soft light, it gives it a hell on an effect...

[mexicano007]

delete the duplicated woman thing.
Text, make it completely normal arial, the only effect you need on the text, is colour and blending, try a clipping mask on the text, and if you can set the text to soft light, it gives it a hell on an effect...

There you go thanx for the great CnC not "Pretty Shit" appriciated Make my Day =)