Brush, render, text, it sucks. Read tutorials.
Judge it. comments, concerns, suggestions.
Last edited by Parody; 09-10-2011 at 12:18 PM.
Brush, render, text, it sucks. Read tutorials.
Originally Posted by ViciousArtGifts:
[daniliard][J3T][Trianglez][J3T(Again)]
ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y (09-10-2011)
Pretty much what Matt said. The text has to be visible if you're going to put it, the blending sucks even though you tried blending the render with the C4D by erasing some parts.. Bad colour execution, too. Should do something to the black background, the black colour is boring as it is and whereas with no effects. Tutorials are a must if you plan to continue this.
If not a brush, then you just randomly pasted in a fractal to implement your background.
Originally Posted by ViciousArtGifts:
[daniliard][J3T][Trianglez][J3T(Again)]
ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y (09-10-2011)
Originally Posted by ViciousArtGifts:
[daniliard][J3T][Trianglez][J3T(Again)]
ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y (09-10-2011)
Dont let @Matt get to you @Parody
hes just blunt and to the point, hes not the type of guy to suger coat what hes gonna say, trust me, ive been down that road, and now take his comments as helpful and not as disrespectful...
Anyways man, you need to start reading some tutorials, you need help with
Flow
Lighting
Depth
Flow, This signatures flow is kinda messy and everything is wild, try erasing some of the effects to help the flow, as the guy is going from Bottom Right to Bottom Left, so try to make the flow go that way, also use Clipping Masks with some brushes to blend in the focal some more,
Lighting, There is none in this tag, you can see where the lighting is coming from, from off the shadows on his hoodie, so for beginners like your self, make a new layer cover it black either put it on Screen, Lighter, or something like that take a 200px or smaller soft round brush ( white ) and just tap it once where the lighting is coming from, where you think it should be, dont make it look fake. and then take out your burn and dodge tool, Burn makes places darker, so try putting it on the darker colors on the tag, and Dodge to make it brighter.
Depth, This also is a missing factor in your tag, Creating depth can be hard for beginners, so ill just keep it easy, stuff that seams far away or up really close to be blurred, so usually if you have an effect and you wanna make the illusion that its drifting away, blur like the top of if a lil bit and make sure it blends sorta,
If you wanna just keep it simple just go make a new layer apply the image go to Gaussian Blur put it around 1.0 or lower and then go to edit>fade blur and put it around 50 or so, where it looks good and erase over the focal. and do the same with Sharpening, but instead of erasing focal, erase the background
Text, Hardest thing in designs, if your not very good at it, just try to keep it simple, like use IMPACT font and maybe some clippy mask with a sexy cursive, font for subtext or your name.
Text can make and break a signature so just be careful
and best of luck to you bro
Originally Posted by ViciousArtGifts:
[daniliard][J3T][Trianglez][J3T(Again)]
ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y (09-10-2011)
@Matt
did i ever say i was making it for anyone?
Originally Posted by ViciousArtGifts:
[daniliard][J3T][Trianglez][J3T(Again)]
I would still say change text color, may be something like red or something brght that can be seen in green..