Volcanic Magmon

[Hexicidal]

I don't think it's good like previous one

[Black Eyed Peas]

I suggest not putting text at all untill you learn the basics of typography and it's purpose.
The background and the render are of low quality and the render is placed too far to the right.
By the looks of it, you literally slapped the render onto the background.
The colours are harsh on the eyes, too. Read some tutorials.