Halo smudgeeee mcgee

[Keroaplt]

I think I finally am able to tag again. First time I made a tag that I actually liked in a long time.
CNC please
[IMG]https://i1114.photobucke*****m/albums/k538/ImminentJM/halosmudge.png[/IMG]

[Jacket]

Cutoff smudge in the top right annoys me. That is all.
On another note,was the backwards "o" in halo intentional in the bottom right?

[Paradox]

Cutoff smudge in the top right annoys me. That is all.
On another note,was the backwards "o" in halo intentional in the bottom right?

There is no text on the bottom right? o.0

[Jacket]

There is no text on the bottom right? o.0

Smudging and lightsource looks like the "o" in the Halo logo.

[hansenkuo13]

Not bad bro not bad. Definitely has some nice atmo to it.
Try sharpening the smudge a bit, and add highlights/shadows for more depth and stuff.
And try blending the render in more.
Maybe make the colored stuff glow and use that as a light source for more depth too. KIU

[Katy]

I dislike the smudging over the render's stomach, maybe make the smudging blend the render in more?

I really like the tag overall though

[Keroaplt]

That render is like no blendo.
thanks for the comments