Finally

**Fucking Moron** · 03-11-2015

So yea, here's a piece I was finally in some shape happy about.
3 Versions

Tell meh which one you like/ what you do like!
CnC Please!
@Color @Mr.Seyeko @KillTheNoise @Ryan @Mokou-Sama @Prince Zuko

**Color** · 03-11-2015

You're doing the same thing practically every time, try some different effects and try different color schemes. Still looks bad.

**Prince Zuko** · 03-11-2015

I agree with Color, I don't think it looks bad, but it is the same color pattern you use a lot....

But the 2nd one looks good

**Fucking Moron** · 03-11-2015

Originally Posted by Color

You're doing the same thing practically every time, try some different effects and try different color schemes. Still looks bad.

Still don't understand why you said it looks bad because I overuse a color scheme. That doesn't make a piece bad fyi

Originally Posted by Prince Zuko

I agree with Color, I don't think it looks bad, but it is the same color pattern you use a lot....

But the 2nd one looks good

Hehe okai...
I just like dem Color Schemas haha
So @Color it's alright if I still do C4D Sigs but different color schemes?

**Prince Zuko** · 03-11-2015

Originally Posted by Organized Chaos

Still don't understand why you said it looks bad because I overuse a color scheme. That doesn't make a piece bad fyi

Hehe okai...
I just like dem Color Schemas haha
So @Color it's alright if I still do C4D Sigs but different color schemes?

yee just drop the blue/green/yellowish scheme... it is sorta repetitive.

But still I like the pieces.

**[MPGH]Doc** · 03-12-2015

Originally Posted by Organized Chaos

Still don't understand why you said it looks bad because I overuse a color scheme. That doesn't make a piece bad fyi

An overused and ugly colour scheme does make a piece bad fyi.

But you have managed to pull it off somewhat okay, I can't say which one is the best version as they all have pro's and cons, but I do suggest changing it up in terms of colour.

**Ayanami Rei** · 03-12-2015

awesome art, i love it

**Mokou-Sama** · 03-12-2015

I'd say its an improvement.
BUT:

1st pic: Too dark to the left
2nd pic and 3rd pic: too much light especially around the face, plus there is something bugging me, that makes the face look kinda blurred somehow...
Dont know how to explain well...

**taken4time** · 03-12-2015

Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama

I'd say its an improvement.
BUT:

1st pic: Too dark to the left
2nd pic and 3rd pic: too much light especially around the face, plus there is something bugging me, that makes the face look kinda blurred somehow...
Dont know how to explain well...

I think the explanation you're looking for is defocus..

as for cnc/ I would advise playing around with a complimentary colors chart..

**Fucking Moron** · 03-15-2015

Originally Posted by taken4time

I think the explanation you're looking for is defocus..

as for cnc/ I would advise playing around with a complimentary colors chart..

2nd and 3rd are made to look that way...
Maybe there's to much on the 3rd one thou :/

**Elocrypt.** · 03-18-2015

The second one is the better of the three. The left side has a bit of unused black space, seems pointless. The character blends into the whole of the photo too much. The lighting is kinda scattered and confusing, it doesn't flow naturally. The red in the image seems to distract from what I believe should be the focal point of the image, the character in the center.

I would recommend working a bit on your image depth (Foreground, Middle ground, and Background), your lights (key light, fill light, kicker light, bounce light, and figuring if your image should be high or low key). Also, try practicing with flipping your image horizontally, this will help you get a different perspective on the image and will help balance it out, sometimes you may start focusing on one area and then lose focus on the rest of the image.

**Fucking Moron** · 03-19-2015

Originally Posted by Invis.

The second one is the better of the three. The left side has a bit of unused black space, seems pointless. The character blends into the whole of the photo too much. The lighting is kinda scattered and confusing, it doesn't flow naturally. The red in the image seems to distract from what I believe should be the focal point of the image, the character in the center.

I would recommend working a bit on your image depth (Foreground, Middle ground, and Background), your lights (key light, fill light, kicker light, bounce light, and figuring if your image should be high or low key). Also, try practicing with flipping your image horizontally, this will help you get a different perspective on the image and will help balance it out, sometimes you may start focusing on one area and then lose focus on the rest of the image.

Omg x.x
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