[Art] First drawing

First drawing

First time trying to draw something so leave your opinions, make sure to be as honest as you like.
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Sorry I was gone for so long, I just needed to take a break as I had ran out of ideas to post, but anyways who knows whether I'll start posting more frequently again I just hope you enjoy this edit, as you can probably tell this is my first drawing so yeah

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Originally Posted by IV2B

k this was very helpful, I'll take what you said into consideration.

Originally Posted by Nervozs

k this was very helpful, I'll take what you said into consideration.

I like the sarcasm, but seriously i doubt you will find better criticism: just by looking at it you can figure out what is wrong and what is right already on your own, what can people comment on?

Jagged lines, moderately wrong shapes, extremely barebone shadows, that's all excused for being an early drawing of yours, what are we supposed to criticize here?
At most i can say that i do indeed understand what you have drawn. If that's relevant to you.

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Originally Posted by IV2B

I like the sarcasm, but seriously i doubt you will find better criticism: just by looking at it you can figure out what is wrong and what is right already on your own, what can people comment on?

Jagged lines, moderately wrong shapes, extremely barebone shadows, that's all excused for being an early drawing of yours, what are we supposed to criticize here?
At most i can say that i do indeed understand what you have drawn. If that's relevant to you.

That's more like what I was looking for, thank you. quick update: Just because I'm new to drawing and this is my first attempt at it, doesn't mean you shouldn't change the way you critisize it, I want you to look past it as being a first attempt at just say you want. Bit like Robotkubo did.

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Originally Posted by Robotkubo

bad. looks misshapen and badly shaded and colored

Ok man, I'll take what you said and somehow change it to your preference, jk but yeah thanks I will actually take what you said into consideration

Since this is your first drawing, I have to say that this is pretty good tbh, just keep drawing and you'll get the hang of it, it does seem a tiny bit rushed for some reason, but I guess it's somewhat still acceptable.

Looks alright for a first drawing.

bad. looks misshapen and badly shaded and colored

First pixel drawing you mean ?

Originally Posted by Ogma.

First pixel drawing you mean ?

I get the fact that I couldn't fix up the quality of the image but I had to get this of my phone, so yeah, but anyways thanks for advising me on that.

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Originally Posted by Gaar

Ear needs to be fixed. Neck line isn't defined enough for the angle it's at. Folds on shirt are not realistic. Mask fits his face to well unless he used a most this doesn't make sense. Hat looks like it was placed on his head instead of actually being on it. I get the scratchy look that you were going for but it didn't turn out the best. You should try clean lines or at least clean up the scratches. Alright for first go but it could be easily improved on. I don't mind giving some further tips if you want it.

Thanks for your comment this is probably the most helpful comment I've seen in quite some time so thank you for this, I don't need anymore help but I will be improving on most of these aspects that you have pointed out as well as what other people have pointed out in my next picture which will be out god knows when.

Ear needs to be fixed. Neck line isn't defined enough for the angle it's at. Folds on shirt are not realistic. Mask fits his face to well unless he used a most this doesn't make sense. Hat looks like it was placed on his head instead of actually being on it. I get the scratchy look that you were going for but it didn't turn out the best. You should try clean lines or at least clean up the scratches. Alright for first go but it could be easily improved on. I don't mind giving some further tips if you want it.

it could use some shading, but else it's a really cool style u've got going

I think it could be smoothed out.

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