Personally Like The Second, All Topics Right-Handed And The Space Below The Char Is Used.
Both are cancer.
Looks pretty amateur with all the different fonts, angles, random composition.
Originally Posted by Doc
Looks pretty amateur with all the different fonts, angles, random composition.
yeah was thinking the same.
Needs a better background too
The first one I guess.
I don't want to discourage criticize or anything but might want to work on that design consistency. E.g fonts, maybe colors? (change or add more detail to background?)
Originally Posted by Doc
Looks pretty amateur with all the different fonts, angles, random composition.
Originally Posted by citydrifter
I don't want to discourage criticize or anything but might want to work on that design consistency. E.g fonts, maybe colors? (change or add more detail to background?)
Thanks for being honest, everyone starts somewhere and learns from their mistakes.
I think 2nd one catches my eye better.
2nd one looks better
First one is pretty okay
Next level mpgh news.
Nice job.
Gotta be the second for me.
Good start, could use some work. Look at how magazine companies format their text and placement. tbh not digging the font/style of the magazine
Second one if I had to choose between the two. I would go for a clean cut professional look. Looks like a amateur as @Doc said.