
Originally Posted by
Sam_Bulldog
Also practice your shots you miss a whole bunch but its no biggie.
Remember all good snipers Quick Scope

Also, even if you miss your shots, you can always edit it out. This will of course shorten clips significantly (which I don't really like) but this can be countered by using longer clips with more accolades, as said before.
I like how you spent time synchronizing the music and the clips, which many people don't do, so keep that up!
In regards to the effects, using them once is plenty as you're trying to show off your skills, not distract the watcher with pretty colors and whatnot. Maybe if the music had a moment that warranted a particular effect it would be welcome, but putting the majority of the effects in the beginning half seems kind of unnatural and unprofessional.
One more thing, I have to say that the last half a minute or so of video footage was kind of redundant; there's no need to show that you're really you, or you have a decent KDR. After all, the end of the clips of all movies are what make it most memorable, and that segment of showing the lobby is just boring.
In summary:
1) Get better clips with more accolades
2) cut out scenes that don't have action in them or those with unnecessary misses, without going overboard and cutting out every extra moment not firing a shot
3) The synchronization was nice and welcome
4) Don't overuse effects, especially those that disturb the viewer's concentration and make it harder to see the clips.
5) Make the montage concise and have it contain footage that is wanted to be shown; there is no need to point out that there is a hacker in the game as long as it does not disturb your gameplay.