Samus.
Samus.
nice depth
bad flow
good quality and text
cant rly tell wut the render is doing?
7/10
bad flow
good quality and text
cant rly tell wut the render is doing?
7/10
Originally Posted by Joay
cant rly tell wut the render is doing?
7/10
I dont really like the colors :[ BW maybe?
bw sucks
especially when overused
*cough cause of death
especially when overused
*cough cause of death
I Like it, not really liking the text, but its looks good.
It lacks direction and thought-out focals. The C4Ds are award and do not compliment each-other or the render. The colours are fairly muted and quite dull. Theres a lack of light, and the text is standard. I think you've over complicated it to be honest. It's ok, but i think you can do better.
As is with the thirds rule, my eyes are drawn to the 2 blue c4ds first and not the focal. My advice is that you place your focals on a third and not the centre. This will both make the tag more appealing but also give you a easy job when it comes to flow (i.e. not just exploding out the centre). I think the flow should have gone diagonal (almost like "/" ) to make it as if the focal has travel to it. Also try to avoid blurring the sides. Blurring should not blatently used to draw attention to the focal, it should give the piece distance.
KIU,
energy
As is with the thirds rule, my eyes are drawn to the 2 blue c4ds first and not the focal. My advice is that you place your focals on a third and not the centre. This will both make the tag more appealing but also give you a easy job when it comes to flow (i.e. not just exploding out the centre). I think the flow should have gone diagonal (almost like "/" ) to make it as if the focal has travel to it. Also try to avoid blurring the sides. Blurring should not blatently used to draw attention to the focal, it should give the piece distance.
KIU,
energy
Originally Posted by Kyle
It lacks direction and thought-out focals. The C4Ds are award and do not compliment each-other or the render. The colours are fairly muted and quite dull. Theres a lack of light, and the text is standard. I think you've over complicated it to be honest. It's ok, but i think you can do better.
As is with the thirds rule, my eyes are drawn to the 2 blue c4ds first and not the focal. My advice is that you place your focals on a third and not the centre. This will both make the tag more appealing but also give you a easy job when it comes to flow (i.e. not just exploding out the centre). I think the flow should have gone diagonal (almost like "/" ) to make it as if the focal has travel to it. Also try to avoid blurring the sides. Blurring should not blatently used to draw attention to the focal, it should give the piece distance.
KIU,
energy
As is with the thirds rule, my eyes are drawn to the 2 blue c4ds first and not the focal. My advice is that you place your focals on a third and not the centre. This will both make the tag more appealing but also give you a easy job when it comes to flow (i.e. not just exploding out the centre). I think the flow should have gone diagonal (almost like "/" ) to make it as if the focal has travel to it. Also try to avoid blurring the sides. Blurring should not blatently used to draw attention to the focal, it should give the piece distance.
KIU,
energy
un-appealing to me v.v no offence...
text is too bland
what flow for there to be isn't really there
c4d's don't mix with the render let alone the blurred one in the background
it doesnt mix at all imo
text is too bland
what flow for there to be isn't really there
c4d's don't mix with the render let alone the blurred one in the background
it doesnt mix at all imo
Originally Posted by taken4time
un-appealing to me v.v no offence...
text is too bland
what flow for there to be isn't really there
c4d's don't mix with the render let alone the blurred one in the background
it doesnt mix at all imo
text is too bland
what flow for there to be isn't really there
c4d's don't mix with the render let alone the blurred one in the background
it doesnt mix at all imo
Way to sheep EnergyK's pro c&c btw. I lol'ed irl.
Anyhoo..Great c&c Energy,
I actually wasn't happy with this at all.
I agree with pretty much everything you pointed out.
I think the issue was that I had no real ideas for this tag.
I ended up just winging it, and the final result was fail lol.
not to bad
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