Smudging

I still suck at it.

Don't coddle the lad Ali../

It's too bright bud.
Also, try to make some more definitive smudge trails,
rather than making it just one big smear. I noticed you tried too, but the execution got a little mest.
This will add more depth, and much more detail into your smudge.
Check out some smudge settings in various places.
If you need help finding some nice settings, just pm me.
I'll be glad to see what I can find for you.