Like the left side of it, the whole ice thing on the right just doesn't flow with me. He's an Urban dancer so maybe some graffiti instead, or some buildings. He also needs to be a bit more focused on the image, not so blended in. but overall its not bad, decent color scheme... 7/10
it lacks lighting and composition
for me it really needs more pop and wow
when i say pop as well u want those niec bright spots
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The only thing I think it needs is the C4D to blend in a bit more.
It kinda sticks out.
v1 is better
the diagonal stuff over the guy in v2 doesnt work
v2 kinda just looks brush whored