3 days work

So these are the things I've made in the last 3 days keep in mind that I started learning this week so that's why they suck i would like feedback on how I can improve

I'll post the other 6 later also tell me what you think about my sig

o know i need to get rid of the text so dont mention that

didnt get to finish it but critizize it anyway

Got nothing to say about this one

I love it! Just change the font. kinda hard to read in my opinion. and remove "made by"
Otherwise its great. also try to add some C4D's or some other stuff to fill in :P.
Great job. 4/5

Originally Posted by Personality

I love it! Just change the font. kinda hard to read in my opinion. and remove "made by"
Otherwise its great. also try to add some C4D's or some other stuff to fill in :P.
Great job. 4/5

How bout the second one and my sig

Originally Posted by name13

How bout the second one and my sig

yes i like what you did with the gradient map. great job. maybe add more shapes or figures. i like it 4/5 aswell

Although your signature needs a tiny bit of work. try finding a better render. and dont do the white outline. :P

I'm gonna take out the made by and change the font but I like the simplicity of the first one
I knew I should have added more to the second one
And my sig yeah I need a better render i didn't try too hard to get rid of the background so that's the white outline it took me like 25 minutes and most of that time was making the background which you can't even see and choosing a gradient map that looked good

Originally Posted by name13

Yeah. Well i like them they just need small tweaks. good luck. looking forward 2 more :P

1st would definitely look better without the "made by" in it. Sometimes simplicity is good.

2nd is really good. I like it.

The first one with the text at the bottom right makes it looked ripped.

LOLWTFBBQ

i like the third one remove the shadow and the background gradient for more night sky(up) to emerald(down) water style , and decrease the opacity of the city reflection also resize the render cuz it look wider than it supposed to be .... this is just my opinion if u like it that way its ok i like it either ways

Your mom looks ripped(not and actual comeback)
The text clearly says mpgh at the beginning

Originally Posted by name13

Your mom looks ripped(not and actual comeback)
The text clearly says mpgh at the beginning

he has a point
it does make it looked ri
and if by the rare chance u made that whole design on it from scratch props
if not meh

Post originals for all 3.

What are originals? Tell
Me then I will I've got all the stocks but idk what originals are

Originally Posted by name13

What are originals? Tell
Me then I will I've got all the stocks but idk what originals are

Post the stocks then.

i like the last one i deno why

3 days work

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