First Signature. Two Versions.

[Anti Hero]

Please tell me which signature is better, and if they're good or not. The only differences are that I changed how bright the focus is and made V. 2 a little more yellowish on the render.
V. 1:

V. 2:


Thanks, constructive criticism is appreciated.

EDIT: First signature uploaded online.

[Mister Krister]

that can't be youre 1st! what tutorial did you follow? gimmie ;P
it looks awesome dude

[name13]

Not too shabby I might say

[N22]

Name, why act like your so cool? D:

Looks good for a starter.
Mine look shitty, just some scribble. /

[Gab]

The first is awesome.

[Flash]

I'm pretty sure that you not a beginner, this looks awesome!
Give me tutorial for it

[Anti Hero]

Oh, oops. First one I uploaded onto the internet. I actually can't remember what I did. I just figure out what to do while I'm at it, so it's usually different each time I do it.

[Mister Krister]

Oh, oops. First one I uploaded onto the internet. I actually can't remember what I did. I just figure out what to do while I'm at it, so it's usually different each time I do it.

so you didnt use a tutorial?

[Assalamu alaikum]

First my shiny white ass.

[N22]

First my shiny white ass.

Thats nice to know. He said it wasn't his first

[Anti Hero]

so you didnt use a tutorial?

Huh? No. When I see others similar, I'll try making mine in the same type of style, but not exactly the same.

[Irony]

REALLY good for a first.

[Anti Hero]

REALLY good for a first.

I accidentally typo'd. I meant it was the first signature I've ever uploaded online, on to the internet. I've got some experience in Photoshop, but I haven't made too many signatures either.

[Irony]

Mmm, still well done.

[ForrestGump]

The first is better because the 2nd is too bright.