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please give feedback ik its terrible it stinks i need feedback and tips please

This shit sucks.

Originally Posted by StayTrue

This shit sucks.

ik i made it in literally 1 minute

You off beat bro

Originally Posted by StayTrue

This shit sucks.

Id say that i fucking agree.

ik it sucks and ik im off beat i told you again lyrics were like 30 seconds beat i grabbed from a friend insanely quick and stuck it together as i said im redoing it just tell me somethin that will help?

better everything?

My Mum could beat you in a fight.

Like I said, get on beat. Rap is all about beat.

ik im off beat and i can be off beat i threw it together and your mom couldnt i can write raps if i try you dip

Originally Posted by MlG10thHost

ik im off beat and i can be off beat i threw it together and your mom couldnt i can write raps if i try you dip

you sound like one of those pretentious douches' off those American movies

/request close gtg do homework ugh then i will TRY to make a new one

If only I still had my rap skills.

I would show these kids how its done.

Originally Posted by derpderp

If only I still had my rap skills.

I would show these kids how its done.

Would be a sweet diss

Derp vs. "MLG"

lol mlg haha thats funny

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