[WIP] Breakdancer.

.Amnesia · 2011-02-15T19:48:31.000Z

Yo faggots, help me out. What should I remove, and what should I add? Help me. http://i398.photobucket.com/albums/pp69/Sirnewell/BreakdancerWIP.png

[WIP] Breakdancer.

Yo ******s, help me out.
What should I remove, and what should I add? Help me.

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isn't that the wrong section?
ehm...

this is just awesome dude

Originally Posted by Sentrax82

isn't that the wrong section?
ehm...

this is just awesome dude

Before the big fuck-up people always posted WIP's in the show-off section, so

Anyways, thanks

Fuck no wait you're right, this IS the wrong section.
fucking hell, what do I hate this new fucking sub-sections shit.
Ryan, get your ass over here and move this shit.

On the left the effects from his arm..the red c4d thingy should be a different colour ..

its awesome! GJ

Too many different colors on effects, and you've got two flow directions so far, which isn't working.

The blue effect in the leg should flow with the right effect.

Originally Posted by Ryan

Too many different colors on effects, and you've got two flow directions so far, which isn't working.

Colors can be fixed easily, and I'll work on the flow shit.

Originally Posted by Takari

The blue effect in the leg should flow with the right effect.

I don't understand a fucking word of what you just said.

Add a different background, think it would look more creative

Originally Posted by Moto

Add a different background, think it would look more creative

Like what ?

like street or school

Originally Posted by Snape

like street or school

IMO, the effects won't be that awesome, then.

Originally Posted by .Amnesia

IMO, the effects won't be that awesome, then.

Valid point.

Adding in a bg like that would just create noise between the effects and the bg, which is just annoying and it looks bad.
Sometimes, simple backgrounds are the best choice.
Like this one.

Originally Posted by Ryan

Ryan the fuck help me out man.

Get rid of the dark C4D behind the blue one.
Either take the ones on his shoulder out, reloacate them, or change the flow to match them. Regardless, they're all the same length, which is a little strange to look at.
Blur the shadow on the ground more, and lower the opacity to make it look realistic. Maybe even scale it out to make it wider.
To make the floor a little more realistic, on the canvas behind everything:

1. Fill with white.
2. Do some black soft brushing on lower opacity about 2/3 of the way down from the top of the canvas.
3. Copy the original white canvas over the brushing layer, and move it up a bit so that only the bottom half of the brushing is showing.

Simple wall-to-floor technique.

That will also bring your shadow out more.

Post your results after that and I'll see what else you can do.

[WIP] Breakdancer.

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