Nitehawk772 (03-21-2011)
poop by austin
my poop, how brown you look
floating at the top of my toilet bowl
your fresh odour and ridged texture
how i envy your entry to the nether
for this is my good-bye, dearest friend
i hope to meet you once again
Nitehawk772 (03-21-2011)
Austin, I applaud your interest in literary art and further encourage you to enhance your skills, it was a great first poem! Congrats!
I'm Alen on Steam. RIP Skype Friday nights.
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I'm Alen on Steam. RIP Skype Friday nights.
I'm Navi's lover 💖
Dave84311: God I've always wanted to eat crayons, with their vibrant colors. Only if they had taste.
Mr. Lonely: @Alen I like making you wet, it makes me hard.
My my, You're just a regular Robert Frost aren't ya?
I love the extended metaphor used to describe your friend and the journey you two have taken into worlds beyond! It is quite touching and as Alen has stated I encourage you to persevere in your new endeavor of poetry creation!
This touched me deeply.
how sweet .
Rick
Mr.T
Unsuccessful
I cried, just lovely
He flushed his best friend.