Heraldry

[AdamBoon]

Second tag in 2 years, slight improvement on the last I think.

[IMG]https://i130.photobucke*****m/albums/p262/AdamBoon/heraldrycolournewversion.png[/IMG]
[IMG]https://i130.photobucke*****m/albums/p262/AdamBoon/heraldrycolour2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]https://i130.photobucke*****m/albums/p262/AdamBoon/heraldrybw2.png[/IMG]

[Faux]

-The render does not blend at all ( Smudging the edges of it doesnt help :\ )
-The c4d's coming from her are out of place
-Text is too jumbled up near the render and should be spaced out further away.
-Lighting could use a little work ( Try messing around with the Dodge and Burn tools. )

[AdamBoon]

Thanks Faux,
- The render wasn't smudged at all, it was a stock and I haven't the time to erase everything precisely.
- Every other position for the text (and mainly because the tag is so empty near the edges) looked odd, like it wasn't meant to be there at all.

What would you suggest exactly for the lighting and text positions?

[Ryguy]

Make those blue C4Ds gold, something similar to her hair color.

[AdamBoon]

some changes made in keeping with your suggestions;

[IMG]https://i130.photobucke*****m/albums/p262/AdamBoon/heraldrycolournewversion.png[/IMG]

[Ryguy]

I like that a lot better.

[Faux]

some changes made in keeping with your suggestions;

[IMG]https://i130.photobucke*****m/albums/p262/AdamBoon/heraldrycolournewversion.png[/IMG]

MUCH better! Thats exactly where i was thinking the text should go. Thats a much greater improvement over original.

[Parade]

MUCH better! Thats exactly where i was thinking the text should go. Thats a much greater improvement over original.

YUNOPLAYHALFLIFE2WITHMEGODDAMMIT.

[Faux]

YUNOPLAYHALFLIFE2WITHMEGODDAMMIT.

BC2&L4D2&BEATHAZARD&MAGICKAAREMOARFUNNOOB

[Parade]

BC2&L4D2&BEATHAZARD&MAGICKAAREMOARFUNNOOB

NOITSNOTHALFLIFE2ISFTWFAGFUCKYOUIGUESSWECANNOTTBEF RIENDSANYMOAR.

[AdamBoon]

Thanks guys.
And I'm now looking at this on my girlfriends laptop screen and it looks absolutly dreadful!
Can't believe how much difference it makes.

(This means everyone needs to buy the same computer as me, then we all see the same thing, kthx.)

[Sinsation.]

v2 is better IMO
Although there all great!