Good For A ******?

Hai guys. I just started playing around and watching tutorials for Cinema 4D. I ended up making myself a new intro. I'd just like some opinions.

Edit: Title is supposed to say "Good for a n.e.w.f.a.g.?"
Didn't think they added filters for that word. Haven't been here a while

Did you use a tutorial or something?

Originally Posted by Ed

Did you use a tutorial or something?

He kinda said he has been watching tutorials...

Originally Posted by Ed

Did you use a tutorial or something?

I watched one. But I didn't follow it. I watched what he was going to make first then I went and made something like it.