My Halloween SOTM Submission

[Fogest]

I haven't made a signature in a while but feel like getting back into it. So this is the first signature I have made in a while what do you think of it:
Avatar for it:


And the signature:


I've already submitted it but I want to make improvements for next time. Suggestions?

[[MPGH]Hugo Boss]

nice.. it was better than your previous one ;D

[Mr.Seyeko]

Ewww...

The outerglow on the zombie is fugly
the focal does not go with the background
horrible blending
seems very chaotic and text is to far to the right and takes attention away from focal same with that moon...

good luck in the contest tho.

[Fogest]

Ewww...

The outerglow on the zombie is fugly
the focal does not go with the background
horrible blending
seems very chaotic and text is to far to the right and takes attention away from focal same with that moon...

good luck in the contest tho.

I've never been very good with focal points or text :|
The moon I added as a little joke which not many will get but in Minecraft there is a big debate on whether Notch (the creator) should make the sun/moon round or square. Right now it's square so since I used a Minecraft Zombie it was suppose to be a a little spoof having a round moon.

[Mr.Seyeko]

Dont get me wrong bro, this has good potential
just get rid of the background make it a minecraft background? with a round moon
and get rid of that fugly outerglow on the zombie
and dont even worry about text, but if you are, make it simple and close to the focal and small, not to small where no one can read it tho

[Arii]

Goodie job

[Fogest]

Dont get me wrong bro, this has good potential
just get rid of the background make it a minecraft background? with a round moon
and get rid of that fugly outerglow on the zombie
and dont even worry about text, but if you are, make it simple and close to the focal and small, not to small where no one can read it tho

I don't know it makes it look fugly:

[Mr.Seyeko]

Can you send me you're render, i wanna show you what im talking about (:

[Hodgie]

Very Nice!
I also think the Outer-Glow makes the avatar stick out and that makes it look good ;3

Good Jawb.

[Fogest]

Can you send me you're render, i wanna show you what im talking about (:

https://i.imgur.com/OGZxY.png

Very Nice!
I also think the Outer-Glow makes the avatar stick out and that makes it look good ;3

Good Jawb.

Yeah I like the outer glow myself as well.

[__sK]

https://i.imgur.com/OGZxY.png



Yeah I like the outer glow myself as well.

The outer glow looks bad because you don't want your image to stick out from your background you want them to blend otherwise it doesn't really look right.

[Hodgie]

The outer glow looks bad because you don't want your image to stick out from your background you want them to blend otherwise it doesn't really look right.

You have no swag.