fist stock work

[Metro]

My fist sig using a stock and no renders, hope ya like it
[IMG]https://i555.photobucke*****m/albums/jj456/darthtrex/narcopy-3.jpg[/IMG]

[aimgods]

nice i love the color

[Obama]

I actually really like it. Text is to small and it sucks. 7/10

[n1kko]

yeah, the text is a little small.

[Metro]

yeah, i wasnt gonna put in any text at all but i felt like i should

[BSG.Flash]

I like it.
You're improving and it shows.
The effects you used are kind of boring though, try branching out by using clipping masks or some effect C4D's.
The text is really small, but it doesn't take away from your focal.
8/10

[Metro]

i removed the text, so yeah

[BSG.Flash]

i removed the text, so yeah

You should try downloading a font pack.

[Metro]

You should try downloading a font pack.

yeah, i think ill do that

[BSG.Flash]

yeah, i think ill do that

There should be one in a sticky.