Kool and nice man but i cant hardly see it in the first pic but i give it a 8/10
Really nice, I suggest like said before, color the borders over with marker or something.
Maybe even scan it if you can and color it with photoshop or something.
Good start! I think the areas that need work are the eyes and the nose. I'm glad you are using the cross sections! Nice work so far!
5.5/10 The line are simply
If you are new on the painting so yeah its fair enought.