Third Signature - The Creed

[-DJ.Voel]

v1


v2


v3


C&C.

[OverNlNethousand]

Lighting is in wrong place and its a bit too dark on the left.
but seriously, I love this signature.

[daniliard]

hmm you need work more on it dude....

[-DJ.Voel]

Thanks for the C&C mate.
I'll make a v2 in a minute a increase the brightness in the left corner.

And Danilliard, what work? Could you be more specific?

[Dead Bones Brook]

Hmm I like it! :3
But it's as Kira said, the left is too dark.

Is that render from Assassins Creed?

[daniliard]

Lighting is in wrong place and its a bit too dark on the left.
but seriously, I love this signature.

I mean what he said

[SpaWn]

I would tone down the bottom right a bit, looks offputting in my opinion. The text also needs to be a part of the signature, right now it's not near the focal, and is just a distraction point. The realism to this signature could be nice. Render should be sharpened more slightly in my opinion. The lighting is a bit weird in this piece, needs to come from the top right stronger, since the lighting on the back of the render is much stronger, then the light source currently. Some dodge/burning would be nice, on the render, play around and see what you can do. Also to add to the depth the background needs to be slightly blurred a bit more.

Good piece, with some work would be nicer. The bottom right just needs removing imo.

[-DJ.Voel]

I would tone down the bottom right a bit, looks offputting in my opinion. The text also needs to be a part of the signature, right now it's not near the focal, and is just a distraction point. The realism to this signature could be nice. Render should be sharpened more slightly in my opinion. The lighting is a bit weird in this piece, needs to come from the top right stronger, since the lighting on the back of the render is much stronger, then the light source currently. Some dodge/burning would be nice, on the render, play around and see what you can do. Also to add to the depth the background needs to be slightly blurred a bit more.

Good piece, with some work would be nicer. The bottom right just needs removing imo.

Thank-you very much for all the C&C.
Will be taken into account in v2-3.

UPDATE; v2 + v3 have been added.
Post which you like the most!

[Dead Bones Brook]

V2 is really good!
I seriously like it!

[-DJ.Voel]

V2 is really good!
I seriously like it!

Awesome thanks.
If you ever want me to make a signature for you, just pm me. I need as much practise as I can get.

[apeguy]

For me, the white brushing ruined the forcal a lot. ;( Change the white to the renders color a bit, it might light it up! :P

[mexicano007]

hm work on it 6/10 dont like brushing no wont be specific cuz one time u gave me a 6/10 and told me to work on it

[-DJ.Voel]

hm work on it 6/10 dont like brushing no wont be specific cuz one time u gave me a 6/10 and told me to work on it

Your giving me 6/10 because I gave you 6/10?
:|
Duude. Grow up.

[blueduece2]

I like V2 best, most of the lighting defects have been addressed, it kind of messes with me tho the way some of the bg is sharp and mid and foreground blurred, it messes with the depth perception. That's a minor thing though, and easily corrected. I also don't really dig the splotchy thing. 7.5/10

[Metro]

I hate over topazed tags :\