Good! the render itself is good! Now, I suggest u make a outline with a pencil then slide it with an angle of 25-30º in order to dark the area around. no need to addmuch shadow. then use the finger to spread it and make a cood background and confering it with an awesome "bevel"
Certainly could be a little better drawn, I feel like you're lacking depth, this drawing is somewhat cut and dry. 4/10
Looks bad In my opinion. It was drawn really bad and I believe you could have putted more effort into that. Overall 4/10
Thanks guys, but as it's said: Its Old. It was one of my first drawings xD
yeh there is room for improvement but still good job