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Hey all am still a noob at GFX but i did some tut as some requested , i followed the tutorial but i replaced the planets with my own he used earth but i used in the middle a brown planet and the other 2 are Jupiter hope you like it ;D give me suggestions to make it better

Try making it a bit colourful ..
And what is that line in the middle ..?
Instead of Jupiter .. add in some moons and an asteroid ..

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Really nice ! Good job !

There seems to be no real focal point as the planets are not equidistant apart.
I'd suggest not using two of the same renders in a single image.
The shadows are not consistent with the light source presented.
The line of light also causes some big pixelation problems with its contact point with the main planet.

well, fantastic!

The main planet in the middle has too many jagged edges. Stars look too blurry. Should have some that are sharp and blurry to create some perspective depth.

i removed the sun and blur in the middle but the plant still has that jagged shit

Earth edges messed up and that flare needs work done on it.

Originally Posted by Johnleepower

Hey all am still a noob at GFX but i did some tut as some requested , i followed the tutorial but i replaced the planets with my own he used earth but i used in the middle a brown planet and the other 2 are Jupiter hope you like it ;D give me suggestions to make it better

what tutorial did you use?

Originally Posted by Symmetrical

Try making it a bit colourful ..
And what is that line in the middle ..?
Instead of Jupiter .. add in some moons and an asteroid ..

i think it's glare from the sun...

Originally Posted by Johnleepower

i removed the sun and blur in the middle but the plant still has that jagged shit

Use the blur tool?

Try following this tutorial

for a beginner it doesn't look that bad.. but there could be improvement, i just woke up, so gimme time to wake up a lil and ill CnC it more.

Looks sexy

random light in the middle of the picture

Not bad. Got it in blue?

Welcome to General, also known as the GFX section.

We give harsh critiques.

Enjoy.

Originally Posted by The Force

Welcome to General, also known as the GFX section.

We give harsh critiques.

Enjoy.

Its funny because, everyone has been actually pretty nice and giving good CnC and here you come with your flame baiting BS talking about wrong section, you really need to get over it.

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