Give me some feedback!

Hey guys, so I decided to seriously try and build a nice track on FL, put a lot of work into it (a week or so) and now I want some feedback. Tell me what you liked, what you did not and why so I can improve for my next one. And help my channel grow just a bit, please I know, some of my videos are outdated, stupid and childish but meh, i might make them private in the near future. Anyways, I hope you enjoy

Those two older tracks were done in less than 5 minutes. I'd say thanks for being kind but well. Anyways, im doing it because im enjoying it and if you do not like it you are free not to listen to it. Thanks for the feedback.

God... The two older tracks you saw were done in 2 minutes... This took me over a week... And please, if you have nothing further to say, dont bother anwsering back. Forget about this thread and get on with your life ok? If you dont like it, dont watch it. Simple.

Ego boost? Look, maybe I was unclear, or you are not smart enough to understand. Maybe I was too soft, I dont know. If you do NOT like it, do NOT watch it. I do not seek ego boost from anyone. I am having fun building tracks in FL studio. If you dont give a shit/consider me a kid/do not like what i make, then good for you, tell me you dont like it, the end. No need to act like a dick, no need to be impolite (but judging from your other posts, its just how you are, probably mental issues but thats not the point). Was i clear enough, or do you want me to repeat in slowmo?

anyways...

Eww dubstep, man dubstep is shit.

Please learn something other then dubstep, like Empire said, we don't need another dubstep artist.

Honestly thought, this doesn't even sound that much like dubstep, sounds more like techno, which is good because dubstep is shit.

anyways it was ok.

Dont be afraid to tell me that it sucks, just dont be impolite like empire. Its my first attempt anyways, thats why im asking for feedback, just to know what to do next. I respect the fact that you took the time to check it out, even though you're not into dubstep and all that wobbling stuff. Thank you for the feedback

I dont have a problem that you dont like it. What I dont like is that you're acting like a dick, and you're still failing to understand it.

It sucked. Had to lock my door to stop my ears from escaping.

You still dont get it. I worked on this for a week. I had 2 other tracks on my channel. Those took 5 minutes and yeah, they did suck A FUCKING LOT. This one, i worked on. You may not like it, i respect it, im not forcing you to listen to it. Asking for feedback may have been wrong. All i wanted is people to comment on what they liked and what not on the track. And its pretty sad seeing another idiot react the same way with you. Till now, everyone i ever talked to at mpgh were nice, polite, and we argued sometimes but we did it maturely. This thread makes me think otherwise. Take a look at Java++'s comment. He says he did not like it while being respectful. You, on the other hand, and that guy above, are acting immature and childish. Not much to say here other than "too bad".