There is some depth, but barely any effects. You didn't blend the white brushes enough. You could've had put some C4D or something so that the right side doesn't look so empty.
Don't mention people.
Too much blur and I would suggest some adjustment layers. Not a fan of the red/blue.
The image itself is already too LQ to work with..
The white and red brushes look very plain but I like the flow of the brushes. Use c4ds instead.
Brighten the sig up and put the text a little to the right and you'll make a sexy sig.
text is always blah for this particular work for some reason and i don't know why, i tried it red/blue and i got a comment about it from someone (not on this thread) and it looks bad because of its complex and colors and stuff even though the font is really nice ...
the C4D is actually VERY HQ but all the lighting messed with it ...
and isn't the purpose of recreating and re-doing something to make it better?
i'll brb imma fix and repost my results as 3 v3 for you :P
i'll take it that you love it?
i have no idea what u did to it, but the quality is shit