Lost in the Chaos

[Mr.Seyeko]

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@Doc
@Ethereal

Coulnd't think of a name for the title :>
can a GM or someone change the name to Lost in the Chaos

[Tide]

Sexy. Whats the original?

[Mr.Seyeko]

Sexy. Whats the original?

This is the original

[Color]

Looks nice.

[[MPGH]Hugo Boss]

Well done again

[Tide]

Lookin' good.

[Aborted]

Pretty good, the character gets lost in the background a bit though.

[InCognito]

I sense tentacle hentai.

[Mr.Seyeko]

I sense tentacle hentai.

you nasteh freak

[Deflorate.]

I like this one, it's nice, and the colors go well. (Or color, because black is in almost everything.)

The only thing I dislike is the fact that once again, your background seems to be really god damn oversharpened, also once you get better at smudging (assuming you're practicing) try to start adding it in your art again. It will add more depth.

Overall: 7/10

[I EAT COCK]

Yeah, well done fdp

[MiHawK-]

Nice man 8.5/10

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Fuck yeah, no topaz. A step in the right direction imo.
Notice how you actually got some depth going on with this one, opposed to that flat look you get with the dreaded plug in?
When you do your sharpen layer you might want to try something I do a lot.

Apply a layer
Then sharpen
edit-fade sharpen bring it down to about 70% then erase some parts that look overy jagged.
also erase some parts in the background and corners to add a bit more depth.
experiment a bit with colors, and just watch your composition too.
The compo in this piece isn't bad but I think some creative erasing in a few spots would have been cool.

Either way it is definitely an improvement.

[666HiddenMaster666]

>Says pink
>So much black
>Can barely see the original

Just being picky, don't know much about psing anyways

[KingDot]

So much gfx shit in general aff.

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