bleach sig

[Hyak]

ok took the advice from last thread

Lighting is bad bleding is good but the darkness in the picture kills it and for once ur Text is good xD 7/10

the game

i think it has good depth, maybe a little over topazed? the lighting could use work and im not a fan of the outer glow on the text

darth

The sides are WAAAAY to plain. By background, I ment the whole thing, not just the part behind the render.

kira

Almost done! My advice now its: Use displace, Render/Distort/Displace, download some psd files on resources sites, like deviantart or whatever, put on this job some displace, the text should be a little more bigger, to the background don't looks empty just do the displaces and place some dark image on there!

bueeno

I think its a bit too dark on the sides, try getting some light there. I like the part where u blured the render bottom, i noticed that

apeguy

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advice please no flame

[apeguy]

MUCH better! Love the flow and color. Like the text too! Good work! 8/10

[Hyak]

thank u but i still want advice :/

[A⁴]

I really can't say much...

[mexicano007]

same just that it looks good nice flow 9/10

[AirCuddles]

Very nice, not much else to say, 9.5/10

[Hyak]

*sigh* looks like im going on instinct next sig :/