Gett Yo Head

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Gett Yo Head
This is composed by me... little help from my frend.... for checking it and fixing some words....
its not tht gud yet....

here we go;

Been around since time began.
U dejanew, if U 1 of the boys.
No flash in the pan but the man with the plan.
Fit 4 fight, if reason the weapon of choice.

Broken dreams, broken rules – we're like a bad fever.
A thing of beauty and a pain 4ever.
Sin and grin like there's no 2morrow, yes2day.
Packing heat – we're the price you pay.

Holla, homie – you a player or a gamer?
Welcome to our crib, get your hustle on.
This party's off the hook, no disclaimer.
So stay on the grind till the break of dawn.

Extreme solutions made us freaks 2 the core.
For what we thought was H2O turned out to be H2SO4.
We got scars 2 prove it, and one rule to win our war.
What does not kill you makes you only do it more.

We get what we want, take what we need.
5 finger discount, steal the night away.
Cruise in the dark with a need 4 greed.
It's a helluva life, and someone else will pay.

Homework whenever, friends 4ever.
Big it up for grit and grinding gears.
Talk is cheap; it's dumb to be clever.
Spit in the wind you get wet behind the ears.

Paper here, Paper there. Paper everywhere.
You can write, wrap, or fold. Or make a bag.
The only thing that counts is the message.
We are the IndividualZ - each of us a dissenter.


not tht gud rite??? not gud words.... but its my first... my frendz say its okay... but not well!!
I've never seen a rapper put chemical compounds in his rap. o_O

Some parts don't go together. So lines don't fit tour style like you were tryin to act more gansta then you are, but some lines I liked a lot.
Like spit in the wind and get wet behind the ears. That was clever.
thx... im jst getting to know rap, cuz b4 i used to like rock and hardcore/metal.
It was decent I guess.. Not really that great though.

Keep goin' though, bud. I'm not into rap but I'm sure you have potential.
thx for the encouragement... ima do more
well if you would like i can help you rap and get better real fast and i will tell you if you have heart or not but so far i see somewhat ok but to predictable all the greatest rappers can have flow and be unpredeictable and have a message in their ryhmes and btw all rapper come from poets =)
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