Law Abiding Citizen
Ok, must watch best fucking movie i've ever seen...new style of text...=/...testing :
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Law Abiding Citizen
Text..i hardly saw it, add a small, very small outer glow, so it will be noticeable.
Sig looks a bit empty :/
The yellow thing doesnt suit, cuz the sig itself is more a dark style.
Try to blend it a lil better.
Sig looks a bit empty :/
The yellow thing doesnt suit, cuz the sig itself is more a dark style.
Try to blend it a lil better.
i hate how the effects r only on 1 side
id like it more if u added them on both sides of render
and yea the text u cnt c :O
seems a bit plain but if you added to both sides that could be fixed
well good job anyways
id like it more if u added them on both sides of render
and yea the text u cnt c :O
seems a bit plain but if you added to both sides that could be fixed
well good job anyways
Try to add a light source. Also as flash said try to even out your c4d's and clipping masks. I like the text tho. And i noticed it.
I like the clipping masks, but they seem just a bit too...straight (for lack of a better word).
Make them flow in a direction.
Also, the brushing behind his shoulder just looks out of place...it distracts from the focal point.
Make them flow in a direction.
Also, the brushing behind his shoulder just looks out of place...it distracts from the focal point.
its good, but text is bad.
am i blind? i dont see any text at all... oh just saw it.. yeah no text.
yeh, i aint got any good C4D's light effects or fractal renders, i agree the Light effect is out of place, the text needs to either be moved or i should mess around with the blending...all i need is a good C4D pack...
If you ever have to look for text for a couple minutes (like myself) then there's definately something wrong.
yeh, 
i must've been looking at my laptop at a funny angle which changed the lighting for the text which made me see it...
i don't see it very well, but the text is nice for simplicity stuff, but im no good at that shit, ima have another go after school.
i must've been looking at my laptop at a funny angle which changed the lighting for the text which made me see it...i don't see it very well, but the text is nice for simplicity stuff, but im no good at that shit, ima have another go after school.
No text is better
try to make it less one sided
clippoing mask splat looks out of place
because it is one sided the sig looks very bland
a little more blending of the main guy would go a long way
with the blurring u could make the guys towards the front slightly more focused and the ones to wards the back less forcus to give it more realistic depth
try to make it less one sided
clippoing mask splat looks out of place
because it is one sided the sig looks very bland
a little more blending of the main guy would go a long way
with the blurring u could make the guys towards the front slightly more focused and the ones to wards the back less forcus to give it more realistic depth
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