Overall: It's a nice piece, but it could be done alot better.
Thank you for your honest opinion and very well done critique, I can definetly tell your no beginner. So thanks you.
Originally Posted by August2007
+'s
Nice background effects.
Good flow.
Decent lighting.
-'s
Too monotone.
Lighting can be fixed.
Too sharp.
Too much blank space.
Overall: It's a nice piece, but it could be done alot better.
I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.
The picture is nice but i think the text font doesnt quite fit with the picture.
Originally Posted by FluffyStuff
I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.
The picture is nice but i think the text font doesnt quite fit with the picture.
What's wrong with my grammar?
T.T
Originally Posted by FluffyStuff
I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.
The picture is nice but i think the text font doesn't quite fit with the picture.
aye! i has the best gramer here
TEXT is ok but it sort of runs into the dude like replace the sest
Originally Posted by tednugent
What's wrong with my grammar?
T.T
Hmmmm... it's not exactly anything wrong with your grammar, it's the fact I gave jadedfrog what he wanted. A proper critique.
Originally Posted by Gourav2122
aye! i has the best gramer here
TEXT is ok but it sort of runs into the dude like replace the sest
First; What the hell do you know? You don't even have photoshop.
Second; Your grammar is really bad. My dog can do better.
PS: Admins and Mod's please do not rage. This isn't a personal attack or flame, merely a point of view.
Originally Posted by August2007
Hmmmm... it's not exactly anything wrong with your grammar it's the fact I gave jadedfrog what he wanted. A proper critique.
First; What the hell do you know? You don't even have photoshop.
Second; Your grammar is really bad. My dog can do better.
PS: Admins and Mod's please do not rage. This isn't a personal attack or flame, merely a point of view.
well yea read this this
Originally Posted by Albatross
From what I have seen on these forums, Gourav has the best constructed sentances of all members.
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Ps> every rips on me belive me actly mods and super basters say the same shit.
Thanks for the comments on it.. Assholes
Yeah it is a bit sharp...And it can be lighted a little better.