death

Originally Posted by ShAg123

"but death cant take me or you
for we are invincible
what i say now is it true
or is it based on fact and principle"

Its asking a question not stating a fact =)

Your grammar is a bit off than. In a poem, and writing in general, the difference between a question mark and a period could be the difference in the meaning of the phrase.

Its called ambiguity

o i see now my bad =( i will work on it but you can read it and it seems like a question

Originally Posted by ShAg123

o i see now my bad =( i will work on it but you can read it and it seems like a question

The point is, its uncertain, we can't read your mind. You have to prep your poems for your audience, not yourself. We are supposed to get the message, and if your grammar is not right we don't know what you're talking about lol.

haahah i got you know my bad well my next one will be more suite and have ? marks lmao

Lol .

Man screw poems. ;l

I don't like thinking about shit like that.... My general preference to death: "Who cares? You won't when ur dead." General preference on life "What of it? Don't do anything you'll regret, because it'll kill you faster, but don't pass up an opportunity because you fear you'll regret. See either way ur screwed, so just live life."

Is it true

omg omg omg

sorry guys

grrrr i made a boo boo

Hum good point i i wiil try and work on a new poem and i will make sure its good =)

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