First Rap

"I'm like a ghost at night 'cause I just walked by you.
Your breath is cold and deep and you're shaking in fear.
You look around and you're willing me no to.
You're trying to reach for your gun and you hear:

"Hey, you fucking little rat. Do you like this game?"
You mumble. You start to cry. You try to run away.
Your eyes go red. Your skin goes white. You had your fame.
You scream. Your heart is beating fast. And you start to pray."

Please comment or rate it. Or you can help me make it better, 'cause I think it sounds a little crappy.