Would be better if you changed the backgrounds color, might be just me. And the frame is too big.
Its nice actually
Originally Posted by TheJoker
I feel like he should have made the box first then the text appeared. Looks weird with the text then the box
I like the text appearance and then the drawn box. I think you should choose a different ending sequence instead of have the drawn box as the intro and outro. Also make the frame smaller like @NeonSpirit said.