My new attempt

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Hey everyone I made a new one since i got my new comp. I think ive done A LOT better then all my other ones. Rate cnc thx

Horrible mist, because it doesn't fade as much as it should and that txt is shiiit. the background isn't really THAT bad, but still.... But it's a good progression from your earlier ones. 5/10

VERY nice better than i could ever make lol 8.75/10

theres a mist? I only made some smudges lol

That doesn't even LOOK like mist. Sorry.

the other dude said mist
but I have no idea what he is saying

I don't like the random blurring on the render...

Originally Posted by Ryan

I don't like the random blurring on the render...

No one does, no one does.

[IMG]http://i520.photobucke*****m/albums/w325/hispiforce/xplode16sigtry2.jpg[/IMG]

there how bout that? And I quite like the font so shadup lol
along with I changed the letters a bit

from my itouch

You should name that one
My next attempt: Removing the "mist"

what mist!!

great progression... still needs work i'm not going to rate it because i'd give a harsh rating

Lol any reccomendations?

bump...
i need some suggestions on how to make these better

umm..
U need to learn what is blending,flow,lighting etc..all tht basic stuff, also text,.

Since ur a beginner dont add text.

Also, try to stick with normal canvas size like 400x150, 400x200 etc..what suits best.

Read tuts, and u will get better

My new attempt

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