My new attempt

Hey everyone I made a new one since i got my new comp. I think ive done A LOT better then all my other ones. Rate cnc thx

Horrible mist, because it doesn't fade as much as it should and that txt is shiiit. the background isn't really THAT bad, but still.... But it's a good progression from your earlier ones. 5/10

great progression... still needs work i'm not going to rate it because i'd give a harsh rating

umm..
U need to learn what is blending,flow,lighting etc..all tht basic stuff, also text,.

Since ur a beginner dont add text.

Also, try to stick with normal canvas size like 400x150, 400x200 etc..what suits best.

Read tuts, and u will get better