there is too much negative space to the left
the depth of the c4ds needs work
the dots over the render dont work
and cause its me the text just doesnt look right
otherwise its pretty good
KIU
opposite to scrcrw, i liked the dots, but, the left side looks kinda empty..yh..
Dont clipping mask text..it always looks awful, even if a professional makes it.. lol
Border could be smaller.
These C4Ds and these leaves? on the left make a feeling, that he is coming out from a forest, thats cool+these dots make a feeling, that he or the forest is magical...well..BG looks a bit weird..lolz
KIU