i agree.. it is a little too bright, but still not bad.
Too bright man, sorry. it takes away all the effect.
Too bright, too empty, too mono-coloured.
MY EYES
THEY BE BURNING
Take out the insane brightness, and some pentooling would look good.
Maybe some 3D shapes, either C4D's or pentooled shapes with radial gradient clipping masks.
Whichever.