3rd Sig

Allright guys... I need some constructive criticism here. And tiips. Lots of tiips.

Heres what i have for this sig i just made...

[IMG]http://i1024.photobucke*****m/albums/y303/XM-SeriesX/BugattiVeyron.jpg?t=1275266844[/IMG]

So tell me whats wrong with it, what i could improve on, and what i have done right. Please. =)

My first tip will be, to not stroke your render like that.
If it didn't blend to begin with, adding a black outline around it won't help anymore.
The smiley face just doesn't fit. Double focals like this usually don't work out.
Read some tutorials bro, google images/ tutorials. Deviant art, Sig tuts
Anywhere you can find something that you think you can take on.
Also..try not to make your text so big and slanting it like that is a no no.