Fail

Fail

Yo ....b...2 thousen 10.....Fail is like a big pale of lard it makes me hard then i get soft and go to the loft fuck a girl you make her hurl oh shit a squiirel
meat can be beat just like a dick thats so sick you fucking prick you have dirty mind i hope to find and grind some bugs and give everyone hugs num nuts is preTty mean you try not to be seen lean to the left just like a theft get rolled over by a giant wheel itll make you squiil like a pig go smoke a cig
yO B DIZZ OUT
B - D-I-Z-Z-L-E

yea this sucked dick like really bad but just practice and youll get better

ha wow shag its not that bad BUT DUDE WTF write it in lines and quit with the fcking big ass fonts and bright ass red cuz dude i hate it it makes me not want to finish it i garuntee half the people that open this will read like 2 lines of it and itl look like its too long so yeah just keep the normal font and color and uhm well i see ur trying to be random and that good and bad cuz all ur raps will sound the same and uhm they might not make sense but to counter-act that fkn write in lines so that you can read it and like you can tell that it flows like go check out shags rhymes cuz he does that and he is succesfull and it flows so yeah try again or just edit it or repost it with the lines and i garuntee ull be able too flow btter so yeah do it over

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