Lightning

Parade · 2010-07-14T07:56:34.000Z

http://a.imageshack.us/img822/5919/lightning3.png 20 minute's work

Lightning

20 minute's work

This is good.
Following a tut?

Work more on it. That's only a start.

Originally Posted by Johnny 3 Tears

This is good.
Following a tut?

I was, but then I did my own stuff.

To my eyes, the colors clash rather than match.
even the big white empty space.
Better of making a transparent background
I like the little bubble splashes though

looks like u took a render placed it then added sum bubbles and thats it.

Originally Posted by Paramount

20 minute's work

Wait..
This is the whole sig? o.O
I thought you were gonna add more.
-
I guess not.
So, uh, I rate this 3.5/10
Just looks like a white background,with a render, then a C4D, and then splatter brushes.

3/10

Dont take this offensively but, actually try your best and work on it and say your done with it, instead of constantly falling back on the whole "oh I did this in 20 min I didn't really try" excuse. Just be honest with yourself.

two words
TOO BIG
your canvas size is fine but your effects are mundo big. your render has a head, a sword? wheres her sexy body XD

not bad use of c4ds tho, but your white bg gets rid of any sence of depth and lighting sorry :/

I don't see lightning.

Originally Posted by serpentine

I don't see lightning.

/fp, dude play ff lulz.

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