another thing i wrote

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here another one and idk y that voice was like that but ill fix it later but yall know what yo do flame whatever but as long as you tell me what you like and dont ok =)

lol "culumbus can blow me"

It sucks.

It's just pathetic. I got no words for it.

And stop making new videos.
You should just quit life.

No, you'll never get better.
Seriously, you should juist jump from a flat instead of making more.

yeah not great. did u listen to it? not everyone can rap. also whoever said get a beat is right. that along with saying things so fast we dont know what ur saying but maybe it makes sense because we cant here it doesnt work. do you really hate the country or were u trying to make a rap.
other than that keep it up.