first gallery (on mpgh)

hey everyone, im new here so i thought id post a couple of sigs and other works ive made in the past. post what u like, and what you dont like =)
(btw, my names on other forums have been "tech-nck sheip", "mass requiem", and "redsmosh") <-- just a disclaimer since some of my sigs have those usernames in them.

first up is the signatures~~~





V1


V2














last one, sry for the length







tell me what you think?

i will get one for me ok?

you make it asyign ECsTaSY

u need to work on bring out ur focals
u cover them too much and drag them in which leeds to poor depth and focal work
a lot of ur stuff is too blurry u need to have a nice sharp focal, which again is affected by u covering them too much
and drop the text its ruining a lot of ur tags

Follow more tuts,
your sigs are pretty good.

Work on better blending techniques,
opposed to covering your focal up with noisy effects.
Practice creating depth in your sigs, and also composition.

Also, I've noticed with a few of your pieces
you have your focals either far left or far right.
Try not to do this,
it creates far too much empty space,which means more work for you.
It's best to not set your focal dead center, but just slightly left or right of the center.
This way you have just enough room to display effects,
all while keeping your main focal the primary attraction of your sig.