FF Snow

U forgot to burn the render edges like Doc said.
Again it looks a bit slapped on.
Don't get me wrong, I like pop focals
but you only want certain parts to pop, not the whole thing.
Lighting could be a bit more balanced.
Maybe have some added behind the render, above shoulders.
Not bad, kiu.

its good but like bawls said...it looks like u just put it on

V1 and V3 .. the difference is the contrast right? ( i cant really tell..i spent 5 mins looking at them)

There's a large lack of a light source. Light is coming from several directions.

colour is better
the line thicknesses are better
imo its a little too monotone
the placement of the hexagons needs work
the biggest lose out here is the blending
the render just looks slapped on which doesnt work well
u really need to work on that to get ur tags past nov into low mod

Originally Posted by Shaadow

There's a large lack of a light source. Light is coming from several directions.

who said it isnt allowed to have many light sources , not just one?

Originally Posted by tosh102

its good but like bawls said...it looks like u just put it on

V1 and V3 .. the difference is the contrast right? ( i cant really tell..i spent 5 mins looking at them)

in v1 the render is brighter in some places, in v3 i burned the render more