gift for ryan

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gift for ryan
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Awesome work, the piece really flows nicely, and the effects are great.
Quote Originally Posted by Lolland View Post
Awesome work, the piece really flows nicely, and the effects are great.
Thanks man.
I think your weakness is the text. I say leave it out from now on. You also have issues with noise. Try not to oversharpen areas which have a lot of chaos and bits and pieces. Your use of fractals is very good and definitely adds to the piece. Although you could have correct the patch of green in the bottom left hand corner.

Minor issues of a well made gift.
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I think your weakness is the text. I say leave it out from now on. You also have issues with noise. Try not to oversharpen areas which have a lot of chaos and bits and pieces. Your use of fractals is very good and definitely adds to the piece. Although you could have correct the patch of green in the bottom left hand corner.

Minor issues of a well made gift.
Thanks for advice.
gj stay making sigs
teh c4ds are too sharp and the bike to blurry in comparison
draws away from the focal
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teh c4ds are too sharp and the bike to blurry in comparison
draws away from the focal
Thanks for advice
Not alot has done to it, I know this because i've seen the render before
But A decent gift I guess.
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Not alot has done to it, I know this because i've seen the render before
But A decent gift I guess.
thx .
Thanks bro.
Love it.
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Thanks bro.
Love it.
Np
Enjoy!
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