Another Inception Train...

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scrcrw, arnt u in gfx team?>

Thanks Bro its same concept but different i tried to add a spikey feel to the c4d and i wanted it bright around the train to add depth.

Looks pretty fucking awesome. =D
On the Font, wrong type, and it distracts you a bit from the main render, which is bad. Try putting them a bit more together.

i was in gfx team

Nice Art you got there I wish it was mine lol

Better?

u prefer it without text or with?

This looks familiar. I just can't put my finger on it. Hmm.

Anyway, it's good, It's a bit too bright and contrasted though and the text needs work. Good though, nice job.

If is going to be like that, I would take it off, or re-do the text if you still have the .psd file.

There are only two things that bother me.

It's way too bright. And then, on the right side, it's darker than shit.

The text is just, there. It stands out way too much.

Other than those, it's great.

Take the text out tbh, and the effects seem a bit overdone.