QuestionFIRST SIG PLEASE CRITIQUE

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FIRST SIG PLEASE CRITIQUE
Changed it all round abit. Tell me wat u think.
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whoring to much... text kills it, especially when you place it on the border.
looks like all you did was put a spiderman render over a background and added one or two poorly placed c4ds.
Any better??
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told you my friend haha/

Its haz humpsta

humpsta get rid of the white shit change you c4d use a bubble one or none at all until you get better with them use one like tis i will send to you on msn
agen, any better??
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You know you can use photobucket right.
I Personaly Like It, But i dont understand it xD
hes my friend hes new im teaching him

edit: of and humpsta insted of uploading a new post just click edit then its makes it messy and less likely banned for spam
now it looks like its having a glow on the outside...just put this on a rest and choose another on the render is fail so fail will surpass your opportunity of success

lighting is all wrong too... wall is dark ok... but lighting comes from the lowerleft... while the car light under neat his body doesnt get any source of lighting... but this is later worries just improve it is better then most start id say not?
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