New to this stuff, so please rate!!!

Hey all, look at the two images ive posted and tell me what you think, and if you like it or not.
Please be critical, but dont just be a fagget troll. thanks for the feedback.

It looks like u just got static around the renders. But my Sig is not the good either so i cant really vote without geting harsh feedback :/

Newbfag... gtfo, dont double thread if u dont like ur pre-comments::
http://www.mpgh.net/forum/148-signat...all-think.html