Bad lighting choice man. It needs more depth, you basically sprayed a C4D on it and called it done. Overall it's okay, I think you could've done more to it. Also, it looks over sharpened.
I kno haha. I'm not a fan of this one really, but oh well.
woah u really rushed this one out didnt ya , u blew away your coloring with that C4D plus the C4D is taking much of the tag and in the same time washing away your depth , lighting is cool but did u consider reducing the light a lil bit and lighting up the goggles?
not ur usual ray
I actually disagree with shojo in that I believe you did a very good job on the lighting.
8/10 IMO.
I think that you rushed too much on this one its not one of your best the colors don't really go well and there's a lack of depth in this I do think that the c4d fills up the space nicely and theres little negative space
You should spend a little more time on your stuff...
You have natural talent, just wait for a concept to come to your head, spend a couple days on it, and I think you'll find you have something good.